Narrative Storyboarding - draft

My video will be a performance - hybrid narrative, as this is my favourite type of music genre, it is what I feel holds the audience's attention most, and this was confirmed and well received within my target audience research. The images below are my initial brainstorms of, and draft of my final storyboard for the narrative sequence of my video.  

This image depicts the initial ideas that I had for my narrative section of the video. The rough drawings and annotations debate which scenes and settings to use for my video, how to create a rough storyline through a limited number of sequences, so as to not to dominate the video, or take away from the performance element.   

The above image shows the first set of sequences. My narrative storyline focuses on an older couple, who are my actor's (cousin) and my grandparents, the benefits of this and the physical similarities between my grandfather and cousin alludes very nicely to a cross generational theme. This theme should leave the audience wondering if the older man is the artist in years to come, creating a warm nostalgic feel which I feel fits the music. The first sequence of the draft storyboard is the older couple dancing in a garden which I will decorate with lights and lanterns to give a romantic feel, the second sequence involves old home movies of the couple playing, perhaps with them watching these. Another sequence could feature signs of affection such as the couple walking, holding hands. The last sequence of this page features the older couple arguing over something, I have decided upon this having researched narrative music videos and finding that there is usually a conflict, keeping the audience's attention as they wait for the resolution.

The resolution that I have chosen as is shown in the above shot, is for the older man to be at the piano following the argument, and his wife to enter, with him teaching her to play the piano - I feel that this could create a sense of synergy with the performance element of the video. Lastly, the final sequence shown is a reverse zoom shot/ close up, which mirrors a shot of the artist to show the audience the cross generational theme. My draft of the storyboard focuses on the actual sequences I aim to film, and the shots/ camera angles I will use have been written below. Within my final storyboard I will explore these shots fully, presenting these visually as opposed to purely through the writing, I will also ensure that any sequences I am unsure of are decided upon and either removed or carefully detailed.